Showing posts with label composition. Show all posts
Showing posts with label composition. Show all posts

Monday, 14 May 2012

Repetition - a force to be reckoned with




A good composition is one in which the artist has considered NOT ONLY THE SUBJECT MATTER, but also the placement of the main elements (shapes, lines etc)  of the work to give clarity and order to his or her ideas (the subject), and to help the view find their VISUAL way around the painting.

One of the most powerful ways to strengthen the composition of a painting is to use REPETITION – it truly is a force to be reckoned with.  Deliberate repetition of colours, patterns, shapes may not be immediately obvious to a non-painter viewer of your work– but they will, for sure, somehow appreciate that there is something special going on in the work they are viewing – their attention will be held, and interest piqued.

Repetition can also be linked to Rhythm - because the eye automatically moves from one similar element to another, in the way that the ear will pick up regular rhythms in music. 

To warm you up, I'd like you to look at the work of GUNILA KLINGBERG.  Her works of the early 2000's were based on repeated patterns which were, of course, very obvious:

silk-screen printed lino tiles

 The piece is basically a pattern composed of ordinary supermarket logotypes in black and white. It exists as a tapestry and as linoleum flooring - and as a total environment where the pattern is spread on the wall, the floor and onto various cubic shapes, which seem to mushroom up from the floor. 

Here is another, window piece, where the pattern repeats, and repeats again onto the floor in its own shadow:

"Brand New View"

Here is her website if you would like to learn more: http://www.gunillaklingberg.com/

Admittedly, these patterns are not being used in paintings - but you can see their power nevertheless.  Now let's look at a couple of paintings.  

Here is a Degas painting The Millinery Shop–and now that your mind has been alerted to repeating patterns by the pictures above, I am sure you will be able to see beyond the hats, and will notice now how the shapes repeat in this image.   The painting is a whole design of circles broken by a few verticals (the hat stand, the ribbons, the back draperies) and a triangle or two (the table, the woman's arm, and the front hat's ribbons).

 And now look at this gorgeous piece, so modern somehow even today, despite the fact that Degas died in 1917!



Repetition has been used in several ways in this image.  Not just in the repeating SHAPES and ANGLES of the arms and legs, perhaps the most obvious;  look again……..notice how he has used varieties of warm orange on the dancer’s heads time and again? And how this colour, albeit modified to be more subtle, repeats and flows right across the top of the picture?And there it is again, in the warm light tones in the floor.  And notice how he has repeated the lightest cool tones in the painting, those delicious soft blues, greys greens  and whites, using them again and again throughout.    And this is not just because the dresses happened to be white.    The use of these pale, icy tones on the dancers’ skirts, backs, arms and legs is masterful - those tones, coupled with the warm contrast of the girls’ heads, are there to move our eye across the image.  They serve to unify the shapes and visually satisfy.

Repetition.  Let me say it again........



Just for fun now, I thought I would wheel out one of my own dancer paintings.  (Pretty daft really to put my own piece here, when I have been showing you Degas!  Well, I did try to learn something from him.)  Unusually, this piece is still in my own collection, unframed, it was done for a gallery show but the gallery closed down before the show took place, so I still have it.  It is a large piece... 21"x21" unframed.   I will send it out in a cardboard roll, fully protected with Glassine, and then it can be framed on arrival. Buying unframed means you will get one of my originals at a bargain price!  With no gallery commission to pay either (my originals generally sell, framed, for at least $1000)  10% of all proceeds from this sale will go to CHILDREN IN NEED, an official charity here in the UK.  If you would like to bid for it, please click here:  BENDING DANCERS ( The starting price is £100, which is about the same as many "painting a day" artists sell their tiny 6x4" works for; if it sells for this,  then so be it!  At least some money will go to the charity.)






Monday, 30 January 2012

UNLOCKING COMPOSITION

While sketching at the National Gallery, I was reminded that once upon a time, art students were encouraged to visit galleries and do what was called "A transcription" of a painting.  I believe that they were actually allowed to stand and paint - a friend of mine did that many years ago - but this is no longer an option in most galleries. 


However, if you get into the habit of taking a small sketchbook with you, a small drawing can be made, even standing up.  If you concentrate on the shapes you think are important, and indicate something of the tone, you will learn a great deal about the painting, particularly if you also try to consider something of the composition of the piece, so your drawing becomes an analysis rather than just a copy.
There is nothing to compare to doing a drawing of this kind.  You will unquestionably remember the painting well; you will have looked at the picture FAR longer than if you had just stood to look at it briefly, or purchased a postcard on your way home.  You may well find yourself becoming aware, slowly, of relationships within the picture that had not occurred to you initially ...connections, rhythms, these things can all be "hidden" within a painting.  


Painters of the past can teach us a great deal; they were often working on different levels at the same time.  They were thinking of the subject, of course, and what they wanted to say about it, but they would also consider the abstract,  formal aspects of composition and design.  There would be a continuous interchange between these two aspects, which would give their paintings a particular power and tension. I believe the best paintings show a respect for both the subject, and the picture surface/design.


Degas'  Woman at her Toilet, 1894, is a large pastel on paper.  I chose it because this painting does more than "nod" at composition and design...in this instance, the design elements are very obvious.  It is full of echoing shapes, and repeated and tilted right-angles.  Take a look at the profile of the big vase on the right;  it is echoed by the edge of the white tablecloth - you can see it best when you look at the shape of the dark shadow below the edge of the white cloth. I find this kind of discovery fascinating - a real "light-bulb moment!"


 Look at the angles made by the arms, in the "analysis" sketch below.  Notice too the emphasis on some edges, which reinforce a direction, then see how other edges are softened and "lost", bringing two adjacent forms together, or in some cases, reducing the impact within the rectangle...for example, the bent lower arm of the hand holding the hairbrush is not as heavily emphasised as the upper arm, or the arms of the maid. Maybe Degas felt he would create a zig-zag effect on the left of the picture, which would have been undesirable - or perhaps a right-angle there would lead the eye OUT of the picture instead of in....conjecture on my part!   anyway - this is the kind of small sketch you could try for yourself:


According to the Tate Gallery's description, "The contrast of the soft form of the active central figure and the heavily outlined shape of the immobile maid generates a visual tension and energy, which is heightened by the rich treatment of the walls and furnishings".  


Notice how the surface of the picture is full of short, interrupted lines, or let's call them directional pointers, which create "stepping stones" for the viewer's eye, connecting in the same way as two people throwing a ball to each other.


View a bigger version of the picture by clicking here


Rather than sketching purely to make a record of what you see, why not consider, sometimes,  sketching to try to unlock some of the hidden secrets of composition.  You may be surprised by what you find, and how your own work will grow as a result.  It's also really satisfying.....and fun!   


See how many echoes, rhythms and directional pointers you can spot in this gorgeous Degas image:


 Ballet Dancers in the Wings (1900) 





Sunday, 22 January 2012

THOUGHTS ABOUT COMPOSITION

Still Life: Pewter and Silver Vessels and a Crab.  Willem Claesz.  Oil on oak. 54.2x73.8cm



This week, I visited the National Gallery in London, had a wonderful couple of hours sketching kids with their teachers in the room with all the Turners and Constables, and before leaving the gallery, my sketching buddy dragged me up to the Still Life room. I was a bit reluctant, to be honest, because I tend to find old still life paintings rather too contrived for my liking!  I also am a fan of the Impressionists, rather than the Realists of old.

She wanted me to see this picture, a classic Dutch still life which fascinated her because of its excellence.  The limited range of colour, the glow of the objects – even the lemon peel seemed to have a glow of its own -  the AMAZING texture of the draped slk cloth – it was almost photographic, but somehow went far beyond the work of the camera.  It was painted between 1633-7, long before the invention of the camera, so there is no chance that the artist worked from a photo, as so many do today.  It is in the Haarlem tradition of the so-called “monochromatic” still life.

I, rather,  was immediately drawn to the design/composition. The underlying structure of the image unfolded in front of my eyes.  It is a slightly strange sensation, but one I relish.    I believe that an artist needs to be able to divorce himself from the “shopping list” in front of him ….in this case, jug, bowl, crab, plate, lemon, glass, salt cellar etc,  or in the case of a landscape, 1 mountain, 6 trees, 1 path, 5 clouds…and stop concentrating solely on how best to paint every individual object.  When the artist begins to be aware of the design of the image,  the underlying important shapes and rhythms, the connections and movements as well as the colour, the tones, and the individual objects,  then he or she will really begin to grow as an artist.   



Looking at the image upside down – a neat trick to use with your own work from time to time – begins to help us to “see” the painting with fresh eyes.  We stop looking at the texture of the cloth, the clever painting of the peel of the lemon, and instead, we begin to see the main elements of the composition.  We can see how the simple largest tonal areas are massed and carefully placed to balance within the rectangle, and beyond that, we begin to spot how the artist creates rhythms to draw our eye across the composition with clever use of repetition of circular and oval forms - albeit subtly, and as a secondary note if you like, because of the close tones - colour is not a major player in this image.  Underlying geometric ideas take precedence in this painting – one main vertical and one main horizontal, supported by a series of interlinking curves.  We have echoing shapes, not just in the objects, but even in the negative spaces between objects - notice how the curved sides of the salt cellar and glass perfectly echo the curving legs of the crab!  I just love discovering little things like that.


  I realise this explanation is far too brief and is a gross simplification, but it is just a beginning.  If you can see what I can see here, then you have made a start.


The word “composition” means “design”, or the putting of things together.   A painter may know nothing much about composition, yet he is unconsciously composing every image he creates. However, it is quite likely that without any knowledge of, and consideration of some of the possibilities of composition, the artist is likely to be dominated by the bits and bobs within the subject matter - like - how to paint the bricks in the wall,  the tiles on the roof, the shine on the apple, rather than by ideas about placement and design of groups of shapes, of a linear framework, of rhythms and movements, of repetition - and more. This takes a bit of effort to begin with, but then once your awareness is awakened, it becomes second nature.   I hope you agree with me that this subject merits looking at more deeply, folks,  so further blogs on this subject to come, watch this space!  In fact, if you haven't signed up to receive the blog by email, now might be a good time to do so!


Just for fun, and because it is yummy and gorgeous, (you will notice, judging by my reaction, that it is obviously more to my personal taste!) here is a vibrant Gauguin still life:


Still life with Mangoes   Paul Gauguin


This time, colour is an important factor ...but perhaps you can  "see" some of the underlying structure?







Monday, 26 September 2011

further sketchbook thoughts

Before we get to specifics about materials and sketchbook types, I would like to say a further word or two about the USE of the sketchbook.  You saw from my previous post that I like to sketch on my travels, and my sketchbooks often contain images which are simply records of what I see and want to capture.


small woodland thumbnails
However, I touched on the idea of also using your sketchbook for THUMBNAIL SKETCHES, and without going into the whys and wherefores and design elements of thumbnails, let me just say this.  When you are working on location, you sit in front of a promising subject - and it stretches on indefinitely, above, below and to each side, doesn't it!  Well, if you plan to create a painting from your subject, it really does help to get some sense of what the image may look like eventually CAPTURED WITHIN A RECTANGLE (or square of course). You can use your camera viewfinder, this helps to isolate a scene.  You can also use a small cardboard viewfinder.  whatever you choose, doing a thumbnail forces you to:

  •  take the edges of the scene into consideration, 
  • to see how your subject "fits" within that rectangle, and
  • whether it "balances" nicely. 



and when you then come to paint at your easel, you will feel a greater sense of confidence - it makes a big difference, even without knowing very much about composition and design..it will automatically help you to trust your own judgement.


The top image above shows three thumbnails in a sketchbook which is approx  10" square.    Two pencil ones, and one with added watercolour.  In the end, I didn't like any of them very much, and didn't paint this subject at all!  But I did enjoy sitting there doing them, and it is all good practice.


Venice window
Now this one I really enjoyed.  I started with the top window, and allowed the image to grow up, down and out from there.  I knew more or less right from the start that I would paint within a tall rectangle, it was that kind of scene,  so I just had to think carefully about the placement of the main elements when I started on my pastel paper.  After about 15 mins spent on this watercolour sketch in my sketchbook, I cracked on with the painting, which happened quite quickly.  the shadows moved a bit as I worked, but I had my sketch to refer to, so it didn't affect me too much, I stuck with the sketchbook shadows.



I could have worked the thumbnail just with pencil, a tonal study,  but actually, I find it really helpful to use watercolours onto my pencil sketches;  with a tiny winsor & Newton travel box of watercolours, I can quickly capture the areas of colour and tone within the scene, more quickly than scribbling away with coloured pencils.  Watercolours are transparent, so if it dries too light, you simply add another layer.  You don't have to worry too much about technique, as it dries very quickly. If you put in a tone which is too dark, you can add some clear water and blot it to lift the colour.  If you wish, you can work with pencils over the top, even a simple lead pencil is good to add extra darks.   Remember,  it is only a sketchbook image after all - you dont have to show it to anyone, it is just for YOU, for reference!

TIP:  Just one thing.........if you do work just in pencil, pastel pencils, or charcoal, dont forget to use plenty of spray fixative, because otherwise, when you close your sketchbook, you will dirty the opposing page.

If you have no chance to work on location to complete a painting from your thumbnail, you can take photos of course, and then work at home, BUT ONE THING IS FOR SURE.  YOUR MEMORY OF THE PLACE WILL BE REINFORCED BY HAVING DONE THAT LITTLE SKETCH ON LOCATION. It makes a huge difference.  Just taking a photo and working from that photo at home is one approach, which can work,  but I absolutely promise you, hand on heart, that you will enjoy your painting experience far more if you have spent time producing a thumbnail sketch first.  Studying your subject FULL SIZE, even just for the 15 mins it might take to make that little thumbnail sketch, makes all the difference in the world.  It is a very positive way to use part of your sketchbook.



Saturday, 24 September 2011

JackieSimmonds Artyfacts








Hello Folks.


It is time for me to join the blogging revolution!  I am an artist, a writer, a teacher, and a perpetual student.  I have decided to share my knowledge, my art, and a few details about my life, through this new, rather extraordinary communication medium.  Communicating with people "on line" really is, to me, magical...somehow people all over the world connect with each other purely by sitting before a computer screen.  We all take it for granted - but actually, it is really very fabulous what we mere mortals have achieved.



Pastel on paper - source - a maarket scene in Cape Town




For years, I have been a painter and teacher.  I have shared my enthusiasms with others, both in person, through the written word in books and articles, via my paintings, and via the internet.  




I have written 7 art instruction books.  Made, I think, 7 or so dvd's - I lose track!  I taught for years, tho sadly now, and somewhat older and greyer than I was,  I do not have the physical strength to teach any more, not in person anyway, so this seems like a good idea to me....a chance to share some of my thoughts and experiences by way of a regular blog post, which I plan to offer weekly, if not more frequently.


So - what will I talk about?


I will show paintings and will demonstrate teaching ideas, will also offer some paintings for sale, the proceeds of which will go to charity.  I favour the NSPCC, the society which helps children suffering from cruelty, something I cannot even bear to think about, ...any movie or tv programme showing the suffering of children, reduces me instantly to a blubbering heap on the floor.


Any of you who found this blog because you recognise my name,will know that I have long been a pastel painter, and I will share some of my pastel thoughts and ideas with you. 


I also work in other mediums, so we might go there some weeks, and I will talk about watercolour, mixed media, acrylic painting and oil painting.  I will talk about sketching too and some of the interesting materials you can use And examine some of the important "building blocks" of painting - I have noticed that many people jump straight in there, without understanding the importance of pre-planning, and my pet subject - "design and composition" is so often neglected.  I will probably bang on about that quite a lot!




Venice sketch, made on location


 I will also talk about some of the things connected with painting and available to painters and would-be painters....painting holidays for example ...what it is like to go on a painting holiday, what you will need,  and importantly, what to expect and to think about.


I will talk about what it is like to exhibit your work, and to organise your own exhibitions.


I am working on the idea of an "Artist's troubleshooter" section, where I can show some common painting and sketching problems, and talk about how to solve them.


I will do my best to vary the content of the blog;  I dont want it to just be about my own work.


If there is something YOU might like me to touch upon, just let me know. 


I hope I might gain a few friends and/or followers along the way.